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04/17/2003 07:02:35 AM |
Critique CLub Comments by Grayce
You met the challenge (which I couldn't) in a creative way.
Your composition is very good, including two diagonals, and use of negative space.
Focus is fine, everything is clear. Nice use of texture. Color is so so. The sand's yellow looks a bit unnatural, but still acceptable.
The image is very slightly over-exposed. Not too bad though.
OVerall this is good.
Regards,
Grayce |
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04/13/2003 09:53:34 PM |
| It's a shame at the place of this one. One of the best of the week. |
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04/12/2003 07:37:20 AM |
| Nice photo. I like the lighting, the subtle tones of the sand and water, and the textures. The composition is really nice, the way the line of the number leads up to the arc of water. |
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04/10/2003 05:14:43 PM |
| I love the idea for this -- it's a little bright, which makes the numbers hard for me to see, but it really conveys the idea of pi. |
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04/09/2003 06:56:54 AM |
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04/08/2003 10:38:15 AM |
| Pi is represented. The sand is blown out in the top left and makes it overall real bright and hard on the eyes. The focus also appears a slight off, in that I can't make out alot of detail. Probably from the brightness. closing down the aperture may help. |
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04/07/2003 08:11:52 PM |
| Unique idea. Well composed. The exposure is not showing it off so well - maybe a little less exposure. |
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04/07/2003 06:26:10 PM |
| contrast seems a bit much here. I like the idea - nice water/wave shot. |
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04/07/2003 04:03:19 PM |
| I like this image...clear focus, interesting interaction between water and sand, great lighting. The presentation is a bit literal for me, but that's just me :). |
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04/07/2003 02:21:29 PM |
| Little over exposed but a very very good idea. Amazing. |
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04/07/2003 01:22:18 PM |
| Okay, there's pi, the first few numbers anyway. I'm not sure that the ocean "swallowing" the numbers says anything to me, but I like the composition of the numbers within the frame. |
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04/07/2003 01:19:50 PM |
| It's a bit overexposed, but the framing is good though. The title is missing a 'w' btw. |
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04/06/2003 11:03:19 PM |
| great idea for the challenge, and I'm sure the sea is going to wipe out your Pi very soon from the looks of it. good colour for now though, good focusing, the lighting is good considering it's outdoor beachy lighting and it's pretty BRIGHT stuff, kinda yellow though. . . |
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04/06/2003 09:35:18 PM |
| Oh man, you mispelled the Titlte. LOL that's bad. The numbers in the sand aren't clear enough to make it clear what you are trying to convey. |
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