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05/08/2005 07:36:08 PM |
| Nice, natural expression. Like it. Like the soft background, too. |
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05/08/2005 07:25:33 PM |
| The railing seems to be the sharpest part of the image, and the DOF is so shallow that the woman is rather blurry. |
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05/08/2005 12:36:43 PM |
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05/05/2005 07:00:33 PM |
| The border is a little bit overpowering |
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05/05/2005 05:55:22 PM |
| i really like this composition a lot as well as the general lighting and nice DOF ... however woman's face seems slightly out of focus and under exposed |
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05/05/2005 05:00:52 PM |
| the face is very dark, perhaps some fill flash would help this photo very much. |
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05/05/2005 11:42:39 AM |
| perhaps a little soft on the model. |
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05/04/2005 05:32:09 AM |
| Colour balance is way too purple, and shot has been underexposed. Face isn't sharp. Composition is unbalanced. Lovely background though. Border is overdone for a simple snapshot. |
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05/03/2005 03:19:55 PM |
| I think, had this shot been taken from the other side, that you may have gotten better lighting for her face. It's a nice candid portrait, but there are just too many shadows in the face, and too much detail is lost. |
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05/03/2005 01:15:51 PM |
| Would have been nicer if her face was in sharper focus. |
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05/03/2005 10:56:59 AM |
| She does look very happy and natural. A beautiful smile, but maybe not quite sharp enough. It does give you a good feeling to look at it anyway :) |
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05/02/2005 03:36:25 PM |
| she needs better lighting on her face..not very flattering |
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05/02/2005 09:47:53 AM |
| Very nice picture but unfortunatly it odnt stand out to me as anything special soz |
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05/02/2005 02:25:09 AM |
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05/02/2005 01:18:38 AM |
| Can't see the clouds, Have to take your word Though. |
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05/01/2005 08:45:34 PM |
| Love the smile, but it appears like the focal point was in front of her and not on her face. |
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05/01/2005 08:15:17 PM |
| A lovely genuine smile is captured here, reflecting inner happiness. A few changes I would make are in: The focus seems a little out, reflection for her skin tones seems over stated, slight halo on upper right part of head and upper left arm, her left. I bet her eyes are beautiful a closer shot or cropping, on her right the rail is stealing the focus from her smile. A different Jacket may of worked better here. 6 |
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