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05/08/2005 05:42:55 PM |
| I like the inclusion of the yoga poster, but I don't care for the harsh flash shadow. |
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05/07/2005 08:12:30 PM |
| That may be peaceful, but it certainly doesn't look like it. The lotus position would have looked more serene. The light isn't particularly good; I find the strong shadows on the wall behind your model distracting. |
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05/07/2005 07:54:23 PM |
| This light is too harsh. The photos levels are not good. Hence it is hard to see distinction in the subtle shadows like in her pants. The contrast is weak and overall has a very unprofessional feel to it. |
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05/05/2005 06:49:19 PM |
| The photo seems a bit tilted, and I'm sure you've heard from others on other advice |
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05/05/2005 05:46:31 PM |
| *twitches* hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm *twitches* |
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05/05/2005 02:03:56 PM |
| I'm sure it is peaceful for her, but if I was doing that I would be in great pain I am sure. Good concept, but the angle is a little static, maybe experiment with same theme and different angles and lighting. Maybe black and white. Good luck. |
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05/05/2005 12:14:13 PM |
| a little soft, and harsh lighitng. |
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05/04/2005 04:01:21 PM |
| Too many clashing colors here, and the model is too close to the wall, the shadows being far too strong. You needed one or two more light sources for this to be effective, and a different POV... the way it's set up right now looks hurried and snap-shottish. |
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05/04/2005 05:36:17 AM |
| Flash looks awful here, especially the shadows. Composition is unbalanced, and picture looks wonky because photo was not taken straight on. Carpet not a good background element. Nothing is sharp. |
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05/03/2005 01:37:50 PM |
| Nice idea, would have been better if the model was centred under the poster & then shot squarely on rather than at a slight angle. |
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05/03/2005 09:10:08 AM |
| I like the pose & the idea. I would have tried to get rid of the shadow with some more lighting. |
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05/02/2005 09:48:23 PM |
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05/02/2005 04:57:10 AM |
| The lightning is not very good for my opinoin which makes colors and shadows uninteresing. With such a beautiful model you should be able to make much more interesting image. |
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05/01/2005 10:26:43 PM |
| her shadow is distracting. |
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05/01/2005 09:45:32 PM |
| Ouch. Maybe have a fill light to soften the shadows, |
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05/01/2005 09:43:09 PM |
| Nice idea, but I feel the lighting could be better, as well as the color tones. The clothing color fights against the carpet, wall and the white line along the bottom of the floor. The light bounce detracts from the peacefulness. 5 |
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05/01/2005 08:23:01 PM |
| nice idea. the shadow on the wall is very distracting to me. Maybe next time bounce the flash or move the model away from the wall. |
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