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Challenge: Minimalism (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus C-5050Z
Location: Great Lakes, IL
Date: Apr 26, 2005
Aperture: 4.0
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/800
Date Uploaded: Apr 26, 2005

Not my first submission for this challenge (4th actually). I think this one has some potential unlike my previous ones, although I may get hit on the flag not being a strong enough subject. I loved the sky and colors in this shot.
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Place: 409 out of 492
Avg (all users): 4.4435
Avg (commenters): 4.7059
Avg (participants): 4.1693
Avg (non-participants): 4.7414
Views since voting: 1060
Views during voting: 460
Votes: 363
Comments: 20
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07/29/2005 08:02:05 PM
i have been hunting for this photo since i saw it in the challenge and couldnt get it out of my head. Im so glad u posted it! straight to my favs this goes~!~~
05/04/2005 06:11:36 AM
Originally posted by wester:

read the challenge description better and then go voice your patriotism somewhere else please.
the flag is out of focus, too.


The above comment was made about a Minimalism photo submitted by Scott Bacon (sabphoto). The portion "then go voice your patriotism somewhere else" is uncalled for and against the rules. There is no reason to comment on the motives of the photographer as long as he is not violating the challenge or forum rules. The commenter owes Scott (and the rest of America for that matter) an apology.
05/04/2005 04:04:57 AM
This shot was rushed and there for I forgot to stop and adjust my f-stop and work on getting the flag in focus not the sailor. The dull colors are due to the fact that I didn't realize my JTX LCD monitor at home is not at all calibrated and shows things brighter than they really are. I have since tried to calibrate it with failure being my only result. So now I send my submission idea here to work to view it on a CRT and adjust as needed. My next submission already looks better.

Thank you everyone for your comments, some were rude but all appreciated. Thanks...I'm learning from them
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/03/2005 04:20:34 PM
I'm assuming that you are in the military yourself if you have access to the raising/lowering of the flag ceremony. Thank you and all your fellow sailors for your service. We as Americans owe you a huge debt of gratitude! As to the shot. Your colors seem very flat. What time of day was this shot? It looks underexposed. It's also very soft. Either the sailor or the flag seem like they should be in sharp focus. Witht the challenge subject and the title of your shot I would prefer the flag to be in focus. The colors may be fixable with photoshop. The sharpness issue requires a reshoot.
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05/02/2005 12:30:30 AM
read the challenge description better and then go voice your patriotism somewhere else please.
the flag is out of focus, too.
05/01/2005 11:07:23 AM
I like the idea, but I think that as far as "minimalism" is concerned, the story here is the sailor saluting the flag. The sailor is a very integral part of the picture. I think that the picture works, but not so much for minimalism. ~6
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04/30/2005 08:16:17 PM
Have you tried cropping this in such a way to cut out some of the shoulder on left while keeping the rest? It might have been a little bit more dramatic
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04/30/2005 01:35:23 AM
The sailor just draws so much of my attention, I have a hard time seeing the flag as the focus of the picture. 5
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04/29/2005 09:38:28 PM
good picture, captures emotion well, but could use something more to get the flag to stand out. Seems like sailor is main subject of this shot.
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04/29/2005 02:45:18 PM
I think this photo could use a bump in brightness and contrast.
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04/29/2005 01:51:40 PM
a great shot and very motivational especially if you are also from the usa...i just dont see it IMO as minimsalistic
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04/28/2005 12:08:22 PM
I can tell by the title that the flag is mean to be the subject of this photo. However, because of placement, it seems more like the background. If the soldier were standing behind the flag, I think that might be more effective. The flag also looks a little blurry, as if the focus was on the foreground.
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04/28/2005 08:59:01 AM
The sailor and his salute looks more primary than the flag to me, or they combine to make the subject. Nice idea though.
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04/27/2005 03:22:27 PM
the flag is blurry
there is something in the lower right coner
this is a dark picture which could be pushed, and saturated (especially in red)
in general i don't find the flag the subject of the image & therfore dont find it minlimalistic
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04/27/2005 02:55:15 PM
nice but the sailor wants to be the subject
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04/27/2005 10:00:19 AM
seems a bit dark to me. He is taking up more than a small area of the frame. good shot though
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04/27/2005 09:05:43 AM
The lighting in this shot is kind of drab. What time of the day was this?
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04/27/2005 02:44:37 AM
Minimal yes, but doesn't have the simple elegance I associate with minimalism.
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04/26/2005 09:16:24 PM
It looks a little dull, you might want to try adjusting the levels or the contrast.
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04/26/2005 09:12:18 PM
Having a Navy son, I can appreciate this image.
From the title I understand the subject to be the flag, but the image tells me the subject is the swabbie.
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