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05/03/2005 02:26:35 PM |
I like it, but my eye begs for a wider angle on the right edge. The idea seems cut off. |
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05/03/2005 11:47:07 AM |
If not for the title I would have never figured out what your intended subject was. |
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05/03/2005 04:51:34 AM |
The hen is a small part of the picture, but I'm not sure of the minimalistic angle here. 4 |
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05/02/2005 11:44:11 AM |
IMO the hen is a bit too small to be a strong point of the pic. |
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05/02/2005 11:12:26 AM |
the bird does not attact the attention at all. I had to read the headline and take a very good look at the photo to get an idea of what you were trying to do. and even hen there is nothing intersting to see here.
improment possibilities:
get the bird at a visible size
change your angle
get the bridge out of the picture, or get the bird in the place where your attention is focused by the bridge. |
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04/30/2005 08:26:27 PM |
if it weren't for the title, i'd have no idea what the subject of this photo is supposed to be. |
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04/30/2005 04:18:46 PM |
oh yes , that is minimal... probably a little too minimal, or maybe the bridge just takes your eye... great idea though |
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04/30/2005 01:04:37 PM |
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04/30/2005 08:33:59 AM |
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04/29/2005 02:43:16 PM |
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04/29/2005 01:20:50 PM |
i dont really see how this fit the challenge....too much going on |
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04/28/2005 11:01:33 PM |
this is the case when the subject is perhaps too small - I wold not notice it if not for the title, and nothing in the photo leads towards it |
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04/28/2005 06:35:01 PM |
It's a little tilted and a tad out of focus
But I'm sure you know that by now |
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04/28/2005 10:47:34 AM |
cant really see the he in the pix need to be closer. |
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04/28/2005 09:54:16 AM |
There is a glare in the top that seems to bleach the bridge. Also this appears to have been too cropped from a larger image and pixelated |
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04/28/2005 05:49:32 AM |
That hen is very minimal :) |
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04/28/2005 05:26:01 AM |
Doesn't really fit challenge |
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04/27/2005 07:06:20 PM |
I wouldn't know anything was there if I didn't read the title. I would have liked to see the bird a bit closer. |
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04/27/2005 02:36:38 PM |
WHOA!!! a bit too minimal! |
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04/27/2005 11:49:09 AM |
i think your subject is way too small i had to strain to see it |
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04/27/2005 10:17:56 AM |
Not sure what the focal point is here, so I don't see that it fits the challange. Would have been good it there was someone fishing/sitting on the grass, or something else to focus on. |
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04/27/2005 07:26:39 AM |
This is to small and not level. |
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04/27/2005 04:21:56 AM |
I can't really tell what the focus is in this picture. I know you say moor hen, but is it that small blurry bird that just barely stands out? I think I get what you were trying to do, but maybe a little less reflection on the water and more sharpness on the bird. |
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04/27/2005 12:59:43 AM |
It took me a good 30 seconds to find the hen, and even then I'm not really sure that's what it is. It could just as well be a chunk of rubble or a hole in the ground. Nothing draws the eye to it, and the rest of the image is both nondescript and slightly blurry, with harsh highlights on the water. |
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04/26/2005 09:11:04 PM |
subject is not clear without title |
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