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04/30/2005 11:04:58 AM |
a more vivid background would have enhanced this photo since so many of the watches have clear features |
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04/30/2005 09:18:34 AM |
nice collection of swatches, like the composition and copy placement as well. would have preferred a rich/darker bacground color. |
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04/29/2005 04:00:40 PM |
The lighting here seems a little dull, perhaps a different colour background would help? |
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04/29/2005 02:45:48 PM |
i think more of metals and rocks when i think of jewlery. not really plastic watches. |
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04/29/2005 10:28:17 AM |
the DOF is a bit shallow an d could use a little snap. small er f-stop and more contrast would make this a better shot. I like it and gave (8) well done |
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04/29/2005 12:32:54 AM |
nice pic but is does feel like it need a little more vibrance, an increase in contrast and a little brighter might do it |
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04/28/2005 08:22:32 PM |
Definitely suited for a magazine, only problem is how blurry the watches look. Great layout! |
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04/28/2005 06:18:21 PM |
Good framing and good color |
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04/28/2005 05:11:08 PM |
Good composition and watches placement. Would have been better with all watches in sharp focus. |
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04/28/2005 11:18:43 AM |
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04/28/2005 10:32:26 AM |
I like the playfulness, but feel the lack of sharp focus on the last watch is a distraction. 7 |
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04/27/2005 05:21:42 PM |
The swatch logo is pushing the limits set for the text, but I really like what you have done. 7. |
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04/27/2005 04:34:08 PM |
I haven't seen swatches in YEARS! Thanks for the nostalgia. I like the composition and it definitely reminds me of the ads from the 80s. |
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04/27/2005 09:15:38 AM |
i think your white balance is a bit off, thats my biggest issue. |
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04/26/2005 03:01:26 AM |
Nice shot, would have liked it more if they were all in focus, some are a bit soft. Can well imagine it as a advert, so a good job! |
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04/25/2005 07:17:16 PM |
Incredible composition! Too tight a crop on the left and the need for more contrast are the only holdbacks from being a great ad. Very nice. |
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04/25/2005 01:25:29 PM |
focus seems a little soft great idea and ad |
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04/25/2005 11:25:47 AM |
Good variety shown, great advertisement. |
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04/25/2005 06:00:44 AM |
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04/25/2005 05:47:07 AM |
I have the second swatch from the top...cool! Really nice picture and proper text. |
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04/25/2005 05:31:04 AM |
Great idea. Lighting is lacking something. Maybe it's the background - it looks grey, where white (try black maybe?) may have been a better choice. Good job. |
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04/24/2005 11:38:00 PM |
I used to own one of these....great pic and suprisingly stirred old memories...thanks.... |
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04/24/2005 10:11:33 PM |
nicely done...tad blurry on bottom of watch closest to "swatch" logo |
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04/24/2005 10:08:25 PM |
Hmmm - not sure if that logo addition (if it was added) is gonna fly with the editing rules. Ok shot otherwise. Could be brighter. Good luck. |
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04/24/2005 08:37:06 PM |
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04/24/2005 08:11:51 PM |
I would hardly consider swatch to be a jewelry... but still a nice composition. A bit blend for the advertisement though. 6. |
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