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Challenge: People II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: Baton Rouge, LA
Date: Apr 14, 2005
Aperture: f/2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/160
Galleries: Portraiture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Apr 17, 2005

jpeg cloned, dodged, desat, brightness, contrast, cropped, and shrunk from the original pic of my sis.

Statistics
Place: 134 out of 251
Avg (all users): 5.3957
Avg (commenters): 5.7273
Avg (participants): 5.2881
Avg (non-participants): 5.5043
Views since voting: 707
Views during voting: 324
Votes: 235
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/24/2005 06:51:43 PM
I like how you can see the photographer (is it?) in the right catchlight. The little white spot near the right cheek is distracting, and can be either cloned or burned out. Also a little more space at the top to see more forehead would help, I think.
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04/24/2005 10:30:51 AM
I like how you can see your reflection in your sisters eyes. Maybe just showing her eyes would be nice.
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04/24/2005 08:51:06 AM
I really like this picture, very "in your face" , I'm drawn th the directness, the unapologetic detail and genuine emotion. Very nice.
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04/21/2005 02:49:46 PM
Interestingly close composition. I would to have liked to see her forehead hairline at least. Cute subject though.
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04/21/2005 01:26:40 PM
maybe a little too close for comfort
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04/20/2005 10:37:33 PM
cute could use less croped forehead would like to see more hair
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04/18/2005 06:20:28 PM
I personally don't care for the closeness of this short, or the close crop.
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04/18/2005 07:47:31 AM
Excellent focus on the eyes, but I think the photo could use a little more contrast
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04/18/2005 05:59:23 AM
Nice shot. I like this but wish for color on this one. Still this works because you have everyting in such nice focus. Good shooting, good luck.
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04/18/2005 03:03:50 AM
Nicely done and a happy face, pretty also...
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04/17/2005 08:21:13 PM
Sharp eyes, but the extreme zoom, with black backdrop doesn't show enough personality of your subject. You also have a slight blue tint to your b/w conversion. It's always good to see the smile in the models eyes as well as with their mouth.
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