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04/30/2005 08:41:19 AM |
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Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) Well composed. You have a beautiful model and she has a wonderful expression. I like th position of her eyes relative to the rest of the image..
(2) BACKGROUND There are a few little blue bits in the background that are distracting to me. I am not sure what they are, but its the first thing mthat drew my eye.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Exposure is good, but not great. I wish (and I know you had no control over this) that there had been an additional light shiningh on her hair. As it is, her hair is beginning to blend in with the background. I like
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL Some of the problems with this image could have been cleaned up in Photoshop.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE This photo does a very good job of meeting the challenge.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO I really like this photo alot. The slightest bit of softness is extremely flattering. |
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04/24/2005 02:11:24 PM |
| Her hair gets lost in the background on my monitor. |
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04/24/2005 10:21:04 AM |
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04/24/2005 10:13:23 AM |
| Capturing an actor is very hard. You dont really know what there real expression is. I love the soft focus effect. |
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04/24/2005 08:45:35 AM |
| fine catch! crisp and clear |
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04/24/2005 03:07:17 AM |
| Beautiful shot!! Focus, colours, pose, composition........ahhhhh they're all great!! |
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04/19/2005 02:47:12 PM |
| clean shot...but would've liked to see more of her environment |
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04/18/2005 08:26:47 AM |
| key light nice. no back, or fill light. a bit 'washed'. nice dimensions. |
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04/18/2005 07:35:30 AM |
| Good capture of the expression. I think a tighter crop on the top would have been better |
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04/18/2005 04:41:35 AM |
| there she is again, i think? i thought i saw this woman in another dramatice photo with a man? hmmm ...great photo! 8 |
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