| Author | Thread |
|
|
04/28/2005 05:20:36 PM |
Comment:
Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) Well composed. The diagonal lines of hammer really draw the eye into the frame. This along with the strong use of rule of thirds makes a very powerful composition. The motion blur of the hammer adds a very strong point of interest and really makes the photo work.
(2) BACKGROUND The shallow DOF adds to the interest of the photo by isolating the important elements... the hand and the screw.
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL Exposure is good. Composition is very strong.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL There is only one change that I might suggest. The white balance on your camera was not set for the proper color. Although this gives you a very interesting shot, I would be interested to see what it would look like with the proper white balance.
(5)MEETING THE CHALLENGE I might get nit picky and tell you that the item in question is not a tack, but you heard that from most of your commentors.
(6) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO Interesting shot that gets better the longer one looks at it. Thank you for sharing your vision. |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
04/22/2005 07:07:30 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/21/2005 07:14:11 PM |
| Hmmm...It looks like you're hammering a screw? |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/20/2005 11:16:32 AM |
| Love the shot and color tones, but I bet you'll get ripped by people cause your subject is not a tack....its a screw or a nail. I dont know if you did this on purpose or if you just didnt have a tack available. Love the motion of the hammer and emotion of the shot. Nice work. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/16/2005 09:09:24 AM |
| Just wanted to see if your hammering a screw into wall? |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/16/2005 06:43:58 AM |
| Uh, thats not a tack thats a screw. Like the use of motion blur and and lighting. Very effective. You've created interest in a mundane task. 6 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/16/2005 05:10:00 AM |
| thats a screw, not a tack poor lighting, 3 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
04/15/2005 08:07:00 PM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/08/2025 04:48:06 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
