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04/30/2005 02:26:46 AM |
Well just started this Critique club thing so lets see how it goes, hopefully you like my examination of your picture :)
Well for starters what we have here is a decent picture so there is not very much I can say about it. It is very good in its simplicity and the girl is looking like she liked her present. And the lightning on her face looks good.
I must however say that there is something that is missing in the picture, something that says that *whooomp!* that I like to hear when I look at a great picture. If you would have made this picture just a litle more exciting you would have been able to get a higher score and I would have heard my litle *whooomp!*
Well hopefully this comment is helpfull for you :)
Good luck in future challenges |
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04/24/2005 07:16:47 PM |
A light box; just what I always wanted. Cool idea, nicely realized. |
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04/24/2005 06:30:10 PM |
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04/24/2005 02:53:53 PM |
Great idea, nice lighting. |
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04/24/2005 01:13:46 PM |
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04/24/2005 10:21:51 AM |
leaves you wondering....... |
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04/24/2005 08:41:12 AM |
love the tones..exiting image..real good |
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04/24/2005 08:35:22 AM |
Interesting idea and perfect exposure on her face.9 |
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04/24/2005 04:41:41 AM |
Very nice idea for this challenge. Light coming from the box is very effective, and adds to the surprise mood of the picture ... great job!!! |
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04/24/2005 03:00:35 AM |
Staged, but ok. Good light on the subject. |
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04/24/2005 02:06:26 AM |
clever lighting, v nice, works well in b&w. great framing. one of my top photos |
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04/23/2005 11:00:09 PM |
Nice idea, and good job and keeping the light at a good level. |
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04/23/2005 04:30:32 PM |
for some strange reason I feel like I've seen this photo before.
pretty model you got there
good luck |
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04/23/2005 02:58:55 PM |
Nice job on the lighting and post-processing! |
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04/22/2005 02:58:48 PM |
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04/22/2005 05:50:10 AM |
Nice experiment and the face is well lit. Took me a litle time to figure out the box and I think maybe there is to much negative space. Also I think that the face is litle to much sharpened. Fine image though. |
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04/21/2005 05:58:38 PM |
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04/21/2005 03:37:17 PM |
Oh, look! It's got that symbol for radioactivity on it! |
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04/21/2005 02:22:28 PM |
Okay....with a small "kicker" light, or back light this could ahve been a fantastic image. Have a small back light helps separate your subject from the background, which is something this image definately needs to be killer. |
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04/20/2005 07:33:43 PM |
i like this setup quite a bit |
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04/18/2005 09:49:29 PM |
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04/18/2005 06:51:30 PM |
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04/18/2005 03:09:14 PM |
Neat lighting, great concept, love it. |
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04/18/2005 10:44:39 AM |
nice shot...did you see my "delightful surprise" ?? 6 |
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04/18/2005 08:50:01 AM |
nice. blacks good, whites need work. |
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04/18/2005 08:47:48 AM |
What a great com[position! |
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04/18/2005 05:22:44 AM |
clever idea putting a light in the box. works very well |
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04/17/2005 09:18:45 PM |
What's inside?! Great expression and use of lighting. Well done |
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04/17/2005 08:27:08 PM |
Its cool that you are thinking creatively, but I personally don't find this type of lighting too flattering. But the shadows are gentle. Good work |
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