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04/26/2005 02:18:49 PM |
hello from CC:
this does not look like an abandoned building. In this challenge, you should of shown more color and texture..try a closeup or take the photo with better light. this photo is too dark. It seems you tried to capture light with a 15 second long exposure, and it must of been really dark there. It's just too cluttered and hard to decipher what this composition consists of. One thing I like is the frame of a doorway. Whats the light in the upper left right hand corner? it seems to be one of 2 sources of light. The 15 second exposure blew out the light and I know how hard it is to capture light and keeping everything from becoming overexposed, i tend to do it alot myself. Good job at capturing the light though.another thing you have here is a good DOF. |
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04/19/2005 07:02:04 PM |
Incredible amount of detail for such a dark scene. Nicely focused. I know I sometime have issues with low light focusing. You did good here. The only thing is, there doesn't seem to be a subject per se. No where for your eye to rest. You have leading lines and depth into the scene, but no resolution at the end of your eyes journey so to speak...
TC
Just before hitting your score, I noticed a what looks like an off centered face within the framelike object... Kinda creapy. You get one bonus point! ;-) |
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04/19/2005 11:04:26 AM |
I see where you were going with this shot and was well seen.
Sharpness/detail is hurting this mage in my opinion, as the right foreground straw is predominant in this picture and it's focus is off/too soft in my opinion. |
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04/18/2005 02:12:40 PM |
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04/18/2005 02:15:32 AM |
| I like the idea of the fram here, its a shame that the top left light is just a little too bright. |
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04/15/2005 11:05:14 AM |
| Nice shot. The light in the upter left is a little distracting. |
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04/14/2005 05:03:07 PM |
| A left-over "Hidden Face"? I love the sense of being able to touch the straw near my right hand! |
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04/13/2005 08:38:15 PM |
| Too much darkness, too much hay, it overwhelms the subject which is the building |
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04/13/2005 06:54:17 PM |
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04/13/2005 10:02:39 AM |
| Nice concept and composition.The b/w works really well with this shot. |
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04/13/2005 02:41:50 AM |
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