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04/11/2003 07:42:42 AM |
Critique CLub Comments by Grayce
Jacko, I like this very much! It is simple and clean and very graphically strong.
The composition works very well with the subject and shadow. It almost reminds me of a sundial. You've left enough negative space to make the subject really pop. The framing here is fine too.
The colors are good and natural looking and exposure is fine. Your choice of white bg is a good idea.
The focus is a wee bit soft, but still within the acceptable range, imo.
Post processing in Clean Image served well.
Overall very good, simple idea, effectively executed.
Regards,
Grayce |
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04/06/2003 08:36:04 AM |
| Good shadow and I like the framing effect. |
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04/05/2003 07:24:32 PM |
| Good detail through out. I like the composition. The shadow is a nice touch. |
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04/04/2003 04:42:44 AM |
| Very nice, simple, effective. |
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04/03/2003 10:31:42 AM |
| Love the shadow, and for once I feel the border helps the photo. Nice work |
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04/02/2003 09:30:07 AM |
Realy nice shot, good idea for the Challenge, shows some imagination and originality.
Your lighting is just fine, creating the shadow that you obviously intended.
I like the colour that you captured of the red "eye" staring out of the Olive.
Good use of the rule of 3rd's too. A really different photograph.
I hope you score high with this shot. |
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04/01/2003 01:14:09 PM |
| Simple and effective. Good use of shadow in your composition. |
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04/01/2003 01:45:03 AM |
| Composition, colour and clarity are just awesome. I really like the shadow and the choice of subject. The framing works well here too. Excellent shot. GL in this weeks challenge. |
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04/01/2003 12:10:39 AM |
| Don't like the green around the frame. Solid photo. Well taken and great color portrayal |
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03/31/2003 08:07:03 PM |
| I love Spanish olives 8 here! |
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03/31/2003 07:33:44 PM |
| Very nice photo, you used the rule of thirds well, nice border, simplicity works so well here. |
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03/31/2003 06:46:02 AM |
| The obvious question: Where's the Martini? Very clean shot. For some reason though, I want the toothpick to go all the way through. 7 from me. |
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03/31/2003 04:13:41 AM |
| Nice. I like it. Olive looks a little dry. |
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03/31/2003 03:20:58 AM |
| I'm sorry, I can't get away from the border - find it hugely distracting in such a simple shot. Also I think there's a lack of detail here - such a simple composition needs something extraordinary (whether it be focus, light, or whatever), and that just isn't here: 4 |
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03/30/2003 07:48:44 PM |
| Very artistically done@ GOOD. I like the white background, the shadow, the colors, the light on the pimento, and the texture of the toothpick. High marks from me. |
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