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09/12/2003 06:40:22 AM |
| Very sharp image. I like the mood. I also did one of those. Check my profile to see it. |
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04/28/2003 10:42:28 AM |
| very nice idea, and great quality. well done. |
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04/09/2003 10:18:56 PM |
Critique Club
Composition: I really like the framing chosen for this image. The shoelace is perhaps a touch close at the very top, but it still looks ok. Having the knot of the shoelace centred gives the image a nice balance.
Technical Quality: The colour is very nice. The light is also quite good (a very small piece of over exposure at the top of the shoe - inside the loop of the lace, but nothing significant). The depth of field is quite shallow, however since nothing is deliberately blurred is looks more accidental than deliberate - thankfully most of the image is quite sharp. Exposure is wonderful - neither too light nor too dark.
Meeting Challenge: It's not an extreme macro, but its close enough for me. Also, given the shallow depth of field I suspect the camera was very close to the shoe taking this shot.
Creativity: It's a nice shot. The shape of the shoelace creates interest and the texture of the shoe itself is lovely. It kind of makes me what to know who Phoebe is.
Border / Title: The border is very subtle - it doesn't add much to the image, but it doesn't distract from it either so no problem. The title is nice - like I said, it makes me what to know who Phoebe is.
Overall: It's a very well executed photo. You obviously put some thought into the lighting and composition is wonderful. The shoe has an old quality that adds a lot of texture and interest to the shot. I might have considered trying to get the entire shoe into focus - perhaps moving the camera back and zooming in to compensate. Well done.
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04/06/2003 06:29:40 PM |
| This image has such mood that the shoelace goes beyond being a shoelace, making me want to know more about both it and Phoebe. Nice job. |
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04/06/2003 11:15:22 AM |
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04/06/2003 06:12:54 AM |
| Not crazy about the subject. Like the tonal quality of this photo. Very retro look to it. Nice job |
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04/06/2003 01:06:49 AM |
| I like the composition. The texture on the shoe is interesting. Good photo, 8 |
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04/04/2003 08:53:40 AM |
| The details in the show are amazing. Nice colors and textures. -danny |
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04/03/2003 07:28:02 PM |
| Very nice detail and focus. Well done. |
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04/02/2003 05:43:18 PM |
| Nice close-up shot. Good color. Something different, unusual photograph. |
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04/02/2003 07:12:03 AM |
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03/31/2003 07:36:59 PM |
| Great shot!!! Love the detail, color, and composition.... Very good job! |
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03/31/2003 11:28:35 AM |
| Hummm, this is a yummy shot. I do think a bit more light would be a good thing, but I love it as it is. Well done. |
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03/30/2003 10:23:13 PM |
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03/30/2003 08:06:33 PM |
| found a real nice group of textures, real sharp, nine for you. |
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