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04/12/2005 04:02:52 AM |
*Critique Club*
Initial Impact: I like the sun in this although it is a little overexsposed. The tree is lacking in detail but is composed well.
Composition: Is good although the horizon is slightly unlevel. Level the horizon and you have a well composed image.
Sharpness: The tree is the main focal point and is in good focus however a longer DOF would improve this dramatically. See how the water is not in good crisp focus. A longer Depth of Field should put the water and waves in good focus and improve the initial impact.
Overall: Overall this is a good image. The yellow border does nothing for the photo and you can improve it a lot by getting rid of it(IMO). The horizon is unlevel and that takes a lot away from the photo. I would like to see more detail in the tree and bushes to the right. |
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04/04/2005 06:30:07 AM |
| Striking image. Good scene. Border really detracts for me (thinking postcards here!). Tree might benefit from slight sharpening, and sun area is a little overexposed (for a key compositional element). |
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04/03/2005 07:24:12 PM |
| Wish I was there in the beginning |
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04/01/2005 06:44:42 PM |
| Pleasant shot. Nice balance in the composition of the elements. |
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04/01/2005 05:39:01 PM |
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04/01/2005 04:44:13 AM |
| This is a beautiful picture. It almost looks like one of those images you would see on a postcard. I love how the tree is completely black and how you can see the reflection of the sun's ligh in the water. Nice work. |
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03/31/2005 09:37:21 AM |
looks like a postcard from paradise...;o)
...well done... |
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03/31/2005 08:38:10 AM |
| Nice photo! I like the contrast of the tree against the sky. I don't care for the border, it makes it look too much like a post card. |
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03/31/2005 04:05:48 AM |
| ahh the sweet scene of paradise... looks like the image was either cropped too closely or just take when a low megapixel camera to begin with. |
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03/30/2005 04:04:39 PM |
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03/30/2005 03:56:37 PM |
| This shot has appeal, but the horizon is a bit unlevel and the color could be more vibrant. The silhouette of the tree is very nice, and the composition works nicely. |
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03/30/2005 03:34:09 PM |
| Colors are pretty. Would make a pretty postcard. |
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03/30/2005 01:18:10 PM |
| Nice shot ,I want to be there! The horizon needs fixing though |
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03/30/2005 12:28:27 PM |
| nice... postcard worthy. ;) |
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03/30/2005 06:23:13 AM |
| Beautiful shot...this border works well with it too. |
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03/29/2005 08:12:47 PM |
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03/29/2005 08:06:55 PM |
| pretty looks like a postcard. |
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03/29/2005 07:46:15 PM |
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