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03/29/2005 02:17:04 AM |
| I have a tough time from this image believing that these people are bored. There seems to be alot things in the photo that says different. If anything they may be tired from a days shopping. Also the distance from the lens to the subject makes it hard for me to identify with the subject. Your title doesn't win me over into believing that they are bored. |
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03/28/2005 02:18:00 PM |
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03/28/2005 07:32:34 AM |
| Sorry this is just a bad snap shot. |
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03/27/2005 07:24:17 AM |
| photo is too grainy and too much brightness. you can't see detail on any of their faces and there is no clear subject. |
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03/26/2005 10:15:34 AM |
They do seem bored.
Some things that might have improved this:
--lower angle to feature your subjects
--adjust levels to avoid the washed out effect
--different cropping so that, at least, the girl's arm wasn't cut off
--a more modest border--with such a broad black border you emphasize the lack of contrast in the image |
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03/26/2005 08:50:26 AM |
| not against boarders, I think this is to much, over all qualiity of the image looks a little flat. would need to know the settings you shot at to try to help.......4 |
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03/26/2005 07:56:51 AM |
Would be improved with some contrast. Also, you might want to consider dropping the black border, or at least making it narrower. They DO look bored.
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03/26/2005 03:26:58 AM |
This could really be helped by boosting the contast. Right now it all looks a little grey.
L8r, |
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03/24/2005 10:56:50 PM |
| quite a muddled shot. a little over exposed and the large black frame detracts rather than adds anything to it. there's also the light/dust spot center right. |
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03/24/2005 01:12:28 PM |
I think its obvious they are bored - no problem there!
However, your picture is slighlty out of focus and too bright. The composition is not very appealing either - it looks chaotic, with some arms and legs cut out. The borders are, in my opinion, too large. Perhaps next time you could submit a larger photo (this one is a little small) and make use of your creativity, which is lacking in this particular shot (and title).
Better luck next time. |
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03/23/2005 06:53:33 PM |
| background is distracting, even though aquariums are cool. you could have tied it in as an intersting part of the picture, but along with laundry, chips, and shoeboxes, it's all lost. |
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03/23/2005 01:09:57 PM |
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03/23/2005 10:48:23 AM |
| That they are- the border's a little much and they arent very crisp but the idea is good- the emotion's good too. 5 |
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03/23/2005 09:08:25 AM |
| Slightly cluttered and no apparent focal point. Seems a little washed, bringing up the levels would have helped alot and reducing the thickness of the border. Still you managed to capture the bored aspect that many others have not. |
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03/23/2005 06:06:31 AM |
thematic!
cud have removed all d clutter along wid d table |
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