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03/22/2005 08:04:50 AM |
u should straighten your horizon line |
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03/21/2005 07:05:32 PM |
Maybe there's something I'm not seeing... WHAT is heroic about a child and a toddler? I don't see any clues here. snow? water? rocks? Afraid I don't see anything indicating these are heros. |
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03/18/2005 05:44:36 PM |
Would have used differnet cropping or positioning of the kids, since the kids are the freinds
but your eyes get drawn to the water. |
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03/18/2005 11:32:05 AM |
Crooked horizon draws me away from the subjects. It looks exceptionally cold there. |
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03/16/2005 07:49:37 AM |
Why the apostrophe? AAAAAAHHH! (End of grammar rant :) |
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03/16/2005 07:30:56 AM |
family photos are great for home and family |
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03/16/2005 07:08:33 AM |
First thing I noticed was the crooked horizon. It would have been better to crop out that completely. Additionally the girls' legs are cropped out, which seems odd considering there is a lot of negative space around them. Crouching down to that you were on their level and getting either a closer up view of the girls or else getting in their entire bodies would have helped. |
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03/16/2005 05:52:46 AM |
your horizon is tilted might want to correct that and maybe get all you subjects in frame for you have cut off their legs. good photograph. |
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