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03/15/2005 09:06:47 AM |
| Sorry that I cannot see the surreal aspect of this shot. The little girl is cute though :) |
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03/15/2005 03:45:07 AM |
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03/13/2005 10:51:04 AM |
| Ahh. Like oranges. Wish I could see what was in her hand. Then it all might make sense. The picture itself os pretty good. Wish there was more light on her face. |
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03/11/2005 07:51:55 AM |
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03/10/2005 12:49:03 PM |
| Cute girl, but where is the fish? |
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03/09/2005 10:18:14 AM |
| I realize you probably receive a lot of comments already that this isn't exactly surreal. However, I would like to offer some construtive criticism of the photograph - it's a really nice portrait - your daughter has lovely expression and you caught her in a great moment. I think though, that in dark situations like this you should steady your camera on a tripod or on something sturdy if you cannot afford a tripod. Low lighting like this can result in a bit of camera shake, even on your end that will blur your image slightly. It looks like the focus isn't as sharp because o fthis. Your composition is quite good, but I would suggest trying to look at your negative space a little bit more. You could have made the main subjects pop right off the page in 3D with a little bit of shallow DoF - the negative space doesn't really do anything for the image. With a shallow DoF, you would only see the shape of the negative space and you wouldn't be distracted by tree branches. Good luck in this. |
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03/09/2005 08:50:42 AM |
| If you moved the sink outside just for the photo, you were on the right track, but your result just looks like a child playing outside in a backyard. Now if she was cutting up a lobster with a hammer and had her face painted like a wild indian, while wearing 20 foot stilts, and had the sink filled with milk and metal bolts, you might have surrealism. Know what I mean? Dreamlike. |
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03/09/2005 08:24:42 AM |
| just not surreal enough for me |
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03/08/2005 07:24:56 PM |
| I don't get it. Looks very real, not at all surreal - 1. |
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