ok, i am voting this challenge in 2 passes. in this pass, you will get a partial comment and a score. then i will come back to comment again. if you have any problem whatsoever with this comment, pm me and let me know. otherwise, take it with a grain of salt...i'm not trying to be a know-it-all, i'm just explaining where i'm coming from in voting this challenge. and, if this comment is NOT helpful (of if you think i'm full of $#!+), don't mark it helpful.
billboards are a science unto themselves. a lot of research has gone into determining just how much information a person can digest and retain in specific time spans. they use this information to develop formulas for determining the number of words and letters to use on billboards, as well as their sizes. they also determine the size and number of visual elements to include.
the graphics/photograph on a billboard are designed to get the point across in a moment. on the road, a driver will have less time with a billboard than a voter will give your image. this is a key element in the challenge: composing a shot that will get its point across quickly and succintly. along those lines, a strong composition will probably have few details and make strong use of negative space.
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this is an interesting idea, and should raise a chuckle for anyone familiar with the beef industray adds. as a photograph, the flash kills it. compositionally, you might have made it work with just the two birds, but the third bird is out of line. that's the nice thing about digital--you can keep shooting until they all cooperate--without it costing you anything but time. now, as a billboard, it's a bit dark, and probably wouldn't work that well, especially at 65 mph. if this isn't working out for you, don't take it personally. just keep on trying! |