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02/24/2005 05:14:52 PM |
Critique Club-Nice thoughtful photo. Works very well in black and white. I have mixed feelings about the negative space. I think the composition might have been improved slightly if your face was sitting more in the thirds position - it feels like it is sitting more on the 1/4 line - so if it had been just a little further to the right in the frame, I think it would have been a stronger entry.
The other suggestion I would have for improvment would have been a slightly different angle to the face to avoid the "double eye" around the glasses. You don't have a true profile because I can see just a little of the eyeglass frame that is over the other eye.
But it is a good shot and is a good portrait. |
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02/20/2005 06:48:40 PM |
I'm a fan of negative space, and this photo brings it out well. bumping up
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02/20/2005 10:40:06 AM |
| I like the lighting and the empty space. Technically crisp. Bothered by the split image of the eye where the lens creates a double, though. |
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02/20/2005 10:16:01 AM |
| A very good study which displays the reflective side of man. Good lighting that brings out the form to great advantage. Bumping up. |
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02/18/2005 12:34:53 PM |
The lighting is wonderful!
I would clone out the shadow of the glasses, but other then that this photo is great! |
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02/18/2005 12:10:57 AM |
| Fantastic pic. I really like the use of negative space in this image. Furthermore the lightning is great, too. 8 |
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02/16/2005 04:19:24 PM |
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02/16/2005 08:56:35 AM |
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02/15/2005 05:34:48 AM |
| Very nice. In color could be nicer. Good work |
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02/14/2005 02:41:29 PM |
| cool effect with the way you have lit this shot... ilike it a lot ... well done |
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02/13/2005 10:08:36 PM |
| Very interesting lighting, framing, and border. 7 for now with a possible bump later |
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02/13/2005 08:01:33 PM |
| Cool lighting and composition. I think it works this well because you are wearing glasses. Good thinking. |
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