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02/13/2005 11:54:41 PM |
"Model" doesn't look very natural and seems too posed and stiff. A tighter crop to eliminate the distracting background and focus more on his emotion would've been more effective IMO. |
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02/11/2005 09:34:46 PM |
I am not so sure but wouldnt it be better if you were closer to the subject (removing the shrubs), and bring flowers rather than a flag.. there is already one on the ground.No offence. |
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02/10/2005 08:39:26 PM |
Twist on the standard grave shot, but what does everyone on this site have against close-ups on the face?? |
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02/10/2005 05:27:18 PM |
The background could have been blured a little more |
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02/09/2005 06:07:19 PM |
Always painful. I believe closer would have been better. 6 on my initial pass. |
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02/09/2005 03:04:43 PM |
Sharpened a little too much? Otherwise, I like it. Seems like a genuine moment. You might try cropping the top a little closer to the subject. |
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02/09/2005 09:17:41 AM |
somber moment even if it's staged |
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02/09/2005 09:01:07 AM |
I find the vegitation in the bavkground a bit distrcting. If you stood on something and shot down a bit more so the top edge of the fram was the grass line, it would have been stronger. I also think this would have been a whole point higher if it were B&W. |
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02/09/2005 03:12:52 AM |
Not an intensly exciting angle, but the picture certianly has a message I appreciate. |
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