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02/14/2005 05:56:51 PM |
Can't read but can write? I'm confused.
The asymmetric border is not appealing, although technically the photograph is excellent. I offer you a 5. |
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02/14/2005 10:41:23 AM |
| I feel that you are going well over everyone's heads on this one - no one likes SAT words, or non-centered, large borders. I really like it. I think that the expression on the model's face is absolutely perfect to illustrate illiteracy. It is well framed but the handwriting is a little too good for someone illiterate, and c'mon, who marries someone who can't read?!? The ring should have come off for this one... Still one of my top 10. |
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02/13/2005 11:50:30 PM |
| I'm not understanding the sense of pain in this photo. |
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02/12/2005 02:08:35 PM |
| but he's writing? He can't read, but he can write? I don't get it... |
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02/12/2005 12:52:55 PM |
| I like the picture. It has a diffeent approach to the challenge than most pictures. The border is too big, half its size would have been enough. 9. |
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02/11/2005 08:12:14 PM |
Really good facial expression of pain.
I am often mistaken but how does analphabetism painful?he is already writing half-way and not using any aid...he could have been heartbroken? plus there is the wedding ring on his finger...to my dearest?? |
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02/11/2005 07:32:15 AM |
| I'm not sure what that is "Analphabetism", but the picture is really good. Nice and sharp. Great composition, and a very natural look of pain on the face. Good job! |
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02/11/2005 06:08:29 AM |
| Very nice shot. My main critisim...... Having to look up the title!!! lol. 8 |
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02/10/2005 10:31:11 AM |
| good lighting and composition. Not sure I see the pain. |
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02/09/2005 02:45:15 PM |
| Nice image, but the title is obviously important, and unless you are familiar with the condition, it doesn't mean anything. |
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02/09/2005 12:37:27 PM |
| I had to look up the title (didn' t know that word!). The picture is nicely framed and sharp, but the main focus of the person being in pain isn't emphasized enough. I'm not sure how to remedy this though (sorry). |
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02/09/2005 07:08:15 AM |
| Direct flash is killing this picture, and blowing out portions of his skin. Try more diffusion if you really want to go with a direct flash. |
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02/09/2005 03:38:45 AM |
| I don't know what analphabetism is but the photo is good |
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02/09/2005 02:39:03 AM |
| Great pic, but no real pain for me. Is he analphabetic AND writing a farewell letter to Adriana? |
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02/09/2005 02:20:56 AM |
| I had to look that one up in the dictionary. I hope others do too before they score your picture. The picture by itself does not grab the viewer. Add in the title and it really strikes a chord. |
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02/09/2005 01:43:10 AM |
Very sad, indeed. It must really hurt not been able to write!
Good point of view! |
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02/08/2005 07:58:41 PM |
| The photo is clear and sharp put I just don't get a feeling of pain from anything but the title. |
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