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02/09/2005 06:39:52 PM |
| Critique Club - I think your concept for this photo was excellent. You have great exposure and good focus. I like the arrangement of the hands - a simple elegant composition. However, your lighting picked up a face, and lettering on someone's shirt. These extraneous things pull my eye away from the emphasis on the thumbs. I agree with the suggestion that some black material draped over the arms, faces, and shirts would have made this a cleaner composition. In photoshop, you could have done a layer of "Selective Color" and using the black as your selected color darkened out the background- which would probably have been cleaner than cloning it. |
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01/29/2005 03:26:32 PM |
| B/W works here. Thumbs up to you for a great shot. |
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01/29/2005 05:58:42 AM |
nice ...new..creative....love the lighting...this one for sure will standout...from the rest of the pics....regards...
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01/28/2005 06:36:21 PM |
| Cloning out the arm on the left side would make this picture even better in my opinion...That way all hands are missing arms. 9 |
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01/28/2005 07:41:58 AM |
| good, simple and straightforward. 8 |
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01/28/2005 04:05:46 AM |
| Great shot, but that kid on the left's lightly glowing face is kind of spooky. |
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01/27/2005 07:23:16 PM |
| I can see the face and the letters on a t-shirt (?) It would have been better if you set up some black sheet to completely hide the background. 6. |
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