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02/04/2005 06:37:49 AM |
I didn't vote on or enter the Threes challenge.
I find it a bit difficult to see three right away and with the speed voters that probably hurt you quite alot. I also look at everything backwards from the rest of you so I think it should have been flipped 180 degrees horizontally, allowing the left to right readers to be drawn into the picture instead of out the bottom. |
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02/04/2005 03:59:15 AM |
I like the geometry here, and like the lighting in the back as it plays off the curves. I see two things that might have made it better to me:
1) Crop the right, it seems unbalanced past the tree. I suggest just to the right of the right edge of the main tree that's lit on the left. That puts the tree towards the upper right corner, and the arcs more or less defining the bottom left corner. Some balance.
2) Consider cloning out the white reflectors in the road. |
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02/03/2005 10:36:23 PM |
Considering I am a "Newbie" in this environment I hesitate to comment but here goes:
1. I found the white dots on the pavement a major distraction;
2. The presence of the street light, tree and what I believe to be an on-ramp had my eyes wandering a bit;
3.While two of the lanes have divided (split) red lines, the line furthest away only have a set of solid lines, something which seem to unbalance the image;
4. There are shadows of the tail lights, particularly at the bottom set of lights which detract from the overall picture;
5. There seem to exist a short section of tail lights just about in the middle of the upper set of lights, which also impact on the overall image;
6. The small illuminated dot located at 7 o'clock when looking at the street light also tends to draw one's attention away from the primary objects, namely the tail lights.
I do hope I have not offended you. I have marvelled at your submissions and almost feel it a sacriledge that as a Newbie I can be so critical of your submission in this instance.
The very best of luck in your future submissions.
Ray |
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02/03/2005 03:16:42 AM |
| I love night pics with long exposure, so a little biased. The reflection in the lane markers and the halo effect around the streetlamp added depth to me though, love it. |
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02/01/2005 10:19:22 PM |
Good job capturing the perfect lines. Could have cloned out the lamp maybe. (10)
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01/29/2005 02:59:11 PM |
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01/29/2005 11:22:09 AM |
| very nice...hope you explain the way this was shot! a 6 |
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