| Author | Thread |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
01/29/2005 03:24:32 PM |
| I would like the see the pencils more in focus |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/29/2005 06:11:17 AM |
| Marvellous use of depth of field. Feels like it would have worked better if there'd be less of artificial feeling in the effect. The major colors of the pens don't have much tones left, but the tips and the wood is great. I'm sure you'd have got more out of the background lines by testing various positions. I'm not sure there's point to get lost of the lines on top right corner. Also I'm not sure the light yellows on same area add up. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/28/2005 09:30:35 PM |
IMHO, Your DOF is too shallow. (It almost looks like it was PS'ed in) The lines on the paper are distracting and don't add to the composition. Your leading lines are not bad, but lose some impact with the lack of focus.
TC |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/28/2005 06:41:42 AM |
| Too soft IMHO. As if there is no focus. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
01/28/2005 06:05:50 AM |
| i find the gaussian blur a bit heavy handed here. If you are trying to simulate a narrow DOF having one plane in focus rather than one part of one plane. A layered blurr that gets stronger as it moves away from the focus point rather then a binary sharp / blurred line is more appealing. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 04/07/2025 06:05:50 AM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
