Howdy from the Critique Club, Patsy! :o)
This is a lovely image. I think you've got a good eye for composition and detail. The previous commenters hit on a couple of things I am inclined to agree with, namely the lack of crisp detail in the black feathers and the eye, which is what I would consider to be the focal point of the image. The background bokeh, which is nice and smooth, doesn't necessarily have the points of light others have spoken about. I found myself not entering bokeh because of all the interpretations of what it was or wasn't. I would consider the background in your image as bokeh, but not really strong, good bokeh, since some of the color variations and patterns become a little distracting rather than blending in to a more seamless background (if that makes sense). The colors are nice and muted, which is pleasing and fits the subject well. I think it's a good picture, which scored in the mid 5s, so I'm not the only one who finds it to be good.
Overall, there are some high points and points upon which improvements can be made. I wish you all the best in future challenges. If you have any questions or comments, you know you can always PM me!
Take care,
Laurie
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