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03/14/2003 07:41:36 AM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
COMPOSITION
I like the overall composition of this. The curve of the plate, with the eggs following it, allow the eyes to travel in a graceful path from one side of the picture to the other. I also think the negative space in the upper part of the picture helps to make the focus on the eggs. It seems a little tight on the right, though. I would recommend a tighter crop on the right or bottom, or allowing more space on the right to give it a more balanced feeling.
TECHNIQUE
The focus in this shot is good, and I think it is lit well. It is bright enough to see the details, but not too bright so that the white spots are blown out. The reflection of the eggs add a nice touch.
OVERALL EFFECT
Great work at meeting the challenge. Looks like maybe you should have boiled the eggs just a touch longer! :-)
best to you in future challenges.
karmat |
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03/09/2003 08:17:49 PM |
| There is no way that someone is giving 2's and 3's in EGG challenge where most of the photos were 7+!! |
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03/09/2003 04:42:21 PM |
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03/08/2003 05:08:33 PM |
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03/07/2003 06:58:47 AM |
| very nice exposure and the reflections are excellent... nice shot :) - setzler |
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03/06/2003 06:28:26 AM |
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03/04/2003 01:43:49 PM |
| Nice lighting, good use of reflections. |
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03/04/2003 04:37:10 AM |
| You have been able make something so simple look so good. Good cropping there. This is really a good photo and I hope you do well with it. |
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03/03/2003 02:43:23 PM |
| Placement of the subject could have different. |
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03/03/2003 07:15:35 AM |
| In my humbled opinion, I think what makes this photo unique is the reflected images. The lighting is perfect, sharpness is good, nice layout. Well done. |
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