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03/13/2003 09:11:53 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
By Inspzil
Composition - Nice simple composition. This is the strong, and weak point of this photo in my opinion. But I think that depends entirely on opinions. The simplicity of the composition in my opinion is what makes this image as good as it is. There isn't a lot of stuff to distract anyone from anything but the egg. On the flip side, this image is a little sterile for my tastes. I'm not saying its necessarily suffering from a lack of creativity, but that there is so much white and nothing else. I don't really like the degree that this photo is high key.
Technical - I think this image is effective overexposed, just not this much. Aside from that this is an extremely well taken photo.
Overall - Good image, just a bit bright for my tastes. It makes me think of hospitals for some reason.
Good luck in your future photos - Inspzil |
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03/10/2003 03:02:53 AM |
Thanks everyone for the comments! undieyatch, I'm curious to know what showed up on your monitor. Please email me if you get a chance. |
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03/09/2003 04:44:20 PM |
The shadow is nicein this photo. |
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03/07/2003 08:02:51 AM |
Like the high key style. This one is maybe just a little too high key for my taste. I think I would like to see (barely) the right edge of the egg or at least until it was out of frame. |
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03/07/2003 06:56:59 AM |
nice white on white compositoin... the subtle shades are excellent :) - setzler |
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03/07/2003 03:54:29 AM |
This would look great on a really large scale. |
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03/06/2003 08:36:19 PM |
I LIKE subtle lighting! NICE! |
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03/06/2003 07:33:01 PM |
A really engaging concept: so subtle, and I love how the egg disappears to the right. |
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03/06/2003 09:17:35 AM |
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03/06/2003 08:53:44 AM |
I think that you need to add some color to your picture. This image just dosent have alot of intrest to it. But nice work |
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03/05/2003 08:46:15 AM |
Ow! My eyes! I'm blind!
Seriously though.. great idea and execution! |
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03/05/2003 04:12:04 AM |
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03/04/2003 09:00:43 PM |
Very cool. But why did you name the pic that way? |
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03/04/2003 03:13:47 PM |
def. the best of the single egg. |
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03/04/2003 01:49:56 PM |
Nice composition, good demonstration of minimalism. I like it! |
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03/03/2003 06:59:06 PM |
Neat effect.....(how the egg disappears into background). Simple.... has a 'pure' quality about it. |
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03/03/2003 04:34:56 PM |
your rainbow visual effects are retained in PictureViewer, which means they are intended. my premium viewer - quicktime makes the effects quite differently than on the net....... and it showed your colour is even more pronounced. often when a rainbow effect is present in a pic, quicktime shows it without the artifact. The opposite of what yours did. |
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03/03/2003 04:02:24 PM |
Great shot, perhaps the lighting is a little bit too harsh, abit more detail in the egg woud have been good. |
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03/03/2003 03:11:58 PM |
nicely done. The high key look of this shot was a great idea and you have executed it very well. Your lighting here is excellent! It's great how subtle the shadows are, yet they are defined and work great here. |
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03/03/2003 02:39:30 PM |
This is staggering - really brave, confident, and very very gorgeous: has that simplicity of 'I could have thought of that, and done it' but of course no-one else did. The first photo on this site that I'm going to rate 10. How'd you get the field so white without it looking over-exposed? Is that just because the background itself is so white? Fabulous ... |
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03/03/2003 06:55:52 AM |
Love the idea, but wish there were just a tiny bit more contrast in the shadow and edges of the egg. Composition and presentation are just wonderful! |
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03/02/2003 07:44:51 PM |
It is a little too faded for me. |
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