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01/14/2005 12:36:27 PM |
The eye is drawn to the high contrast of the box, which is out of focus, rather than the subject: the cigarette. The side of the box pulls the viewer's eye out of the frame. Concentrating on the cigarette and increasing the exposure would aid the composition (bringing up the whites and allowing the texture of the tobacco leaves to be seen), but it's a rather uninspired setup.
Just my opinions, of course. |
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01/07/2005 06:22:28 AM |
| I can relate to this, Nice shot. |
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01/02/2005 07:16:00 AM |
| Wish my Dad could see this one.... It might inspire him! Good luck! (9) |
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01/01/2005 09:58:06 PM |
| Very smooth -- adding a bunch of blank space above would be interesting I think, as if the current photo was only the bottom 1/3 or so. Just a thought |
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