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Mechanical Pencil
Mechanical Pencil
sfarrell23


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Challenge: Mechanical (Advanced Editing III*)
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 5400
Location: Home
Date: Dec 28, 2004
Galleries: Macro, Digital Art
Date Uploaded: Dec 28, 2004

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Statistics
Place: 124 out of 243
Avg (all users): 5.0784
Avg (commenters): 5.8889
Avg (participants): 4.9469
Avg (non-participants): 5.1742
Views since voting: 697
Views during voting: 356
Votes: 268
Comments: 19
Favorites: 0

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 01/05/2005 03:34:07 AM
I rated this pretty highly.
Expected to see it among the top twenty.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/04/2005 04:15:41 AM
I like it!
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 01/03/2005 12:58:59 PM
Without the title, this image doesn't share much information about the object. Perhaps a line or word would clue the viewer in and result in a more engaging image.
 01/03/2005 10:13:31 AM
The focus on this one is really quite astounding, and I like your color choice for the border too.
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 01/02/2005 04:59:15 PM
Nice treatment. Could appear closer to the center?... Nice editing! Good Work!
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 01/02/2005 01:23:46 PM
NIce idea. I like using the negative space. Certainly fits the challenge well. But IMO it needs a deeper dof to show more of the pencil. Also, i think if the pencil were not quite so far in the corner, it would balance out a little stronger.
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 01/01/2005 07:11:47 PM
Great view point!
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 12/31/2004 12:54:07 PM
I usually prefer more of an image to be in focus but here this works.
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 12/30/2004 06:24:22 PM
ann oddlu appealing image of the pencil itself, but hurt by the very odd framing of the object.
 12/30/2004 06:23:39 PM
I like your composition. Something seems to be lacking, but I don't know what. A 6
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 12/29/2004 08:16:04 PM
Interesting choice of composition. The graininess of the shot and the border my points of criticism. Pretty good.
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 12/29/2004 04:25:21 PM
Nice but the composition is a bit offputting and you seem to have cut the end off the pencil right at the top.
 12/29/2004 02:48:39 PM
A little noisy. Otherwise, very unique.
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 12/29/2004 11:10:08 AM
wish more of the pencil was in focus
 12/29/2004 07:14:03 AM
lovely use of negative space. Would like to see a little more sharpness in the pencil before it becomes defocussed. Lighting is nice.
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 12/29/2004 05:16:45 AM
Interesting perspective
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 12/29/2004 04:52:29 AM
Good macro! A little tight to the corner IMHO.
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 12/29/2004 04:16:42 AM
it´s like a murder weapon. to much negative space
 12/29/2004 12:53:23 AM
an exquisit subject and a nice positioning idea. You might have concidered the rule of thirds to get it perfect.
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