Critique Club:
Meeting the Challenge: Does this well, the model and photograph "planner" did well illustrating this emotion at the focal point of the image.
Composition: Would have liked to see a tighter crop, eliminating the furniture, and cords behind the girl. I think it would have added some extra drama to the shot. I like the way the girls arm leads to the letter.
Technical Quality: I am not one that prefers graininess in any photos unless they are intended to be abstract (and as I said, that's my personal preference). There are a lot of jpg artifacts to the right of the girl, and by the desk, which are unattractive. I do like the darkness of the focal point, helping to emphasize the dark mood.
Creativity: I think you did well with this at the focal point. Even though the photo is staged, you put a lot of effort into all the details with the subject, good job.
Overall Conclusion: As noted above, a tighter crop and increased photo quality would have helped this shot a lot, although the message is right on.
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Kandice Jones |
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