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12/29/2004 07:44:56 AM |
***CRITIQUE CLUB RESPONSE***
There's really not much I can say about this image except "well done!" The score says the rest, and I quite agree it's a top-10 image in the deja vu challenge. I went to the original, and I think this is a fabulous variation on it.
One thing I noticed is that the original is more "linear", where yours has a "zoom-out_ effect, with the zoom popping down to the crossed-bars center of your image. It may not be intentional, but it's a nice subtle metaphor; UK is an island, a focused place so to speak, where USA is a sprawling, linear kind of place. So that's good.
If I had any suggestion for improvement, it might be to try cleaning up the whites a little bit with curves. I'd like to see how this worked witha little more pop int he tonal range. But that's a nit. Good job!
Robt.
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12/27/2004 04:52:52 AM |
Hey Mark: a superb rendition. Congratulations on your 6th placing. |
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12/26/2004 02:14:25 PM |
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12/26/2004 11:07:13 AM |
Replication with good taste! Bumping up. |
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12/23/2004 11:46:38 PM |
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12/23/2004 12:44:37 PM |
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12/23/2004 07:15:06 AM |
It´s a bit to clean, to static for my taste or even to "perfect". No little droplets inbetween the bigger droplets and IMO that is what makes the original shot work so well. Not bad though, way better than what I came up with, gave it a 7. |
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12/23/2004 06:15:56 AM |
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12/22/2004 10:30:58 AM |
Nice job. Lots of depth in this image. Good luck. |
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12/22/2004 07:45:52 AM |
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12/22/2004 07:23:59 AM |
Oh no, a flag. Good crop, excellent DOF. I love all the different reflections you get. |
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12/22/2004 06:04:32 AM |
Well done - good composition. |
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12/22/2004 03:49:45 AM |
The original was one of my first favourites when I joined the site..so I`ve got to like this one..an excellent version, very well done. |
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12/21/2004 06:49:33 PM |
Nice. Advanced editing would have alloed you to remove the imperfection above the lest most droplet. 8. |
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12/21/2004 03:50:58 PM |
A very nicely done rendition of the original! |
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12/21/2004 12:44:56 PM |
Outstanding tribute in every way. Flawless execution and lots of eye appeal. |
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12/20/2004 02:53:39 PM |
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12/20/2004 11:07:54 AM |
Nice exchange of flags, the amercan one is getting a bit tired.... |
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12/20/2004 09:21:55 AM |
definitely cleaner looking than the original, and the drops are all of a more uniform size (not that either of those things make one better than the other :) nice tribute, well set up. |
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12/20/2004 08:13:55 AM |
Perfectly executed. Doesn't have the variety of reflections that Setz's more varied drop sizes gives. |
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12/19/2004 11:40:35 PM |
Made me smile - well executed - a good imitation and a gentle parody. |
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12/19/2004 09:23:12 PM |
GO UK! :) Very nice shot, and better than the original in my eyes :) |
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12/19/2004 07:14:35 PM |
=) Don't like the black/transparent parts of the images in the drops... |
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