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12/22/2004 05:41:40 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Not sure I like the crop. Seems like you could have included more at the top but also more at the bottom and left more black all around as open space even on the left where it seems like it just faded to black.
Your subject is definately interesting -- seems like an old clay model of some sort. The neck is definately broken, but I can't say I feel most viewers would notice that if the title didn't point it out.
There's a lot of potential I think with this subject, but nothing just stands out, grabs me, or pulls me into the image. Instead, my eyes just seem to wander all around. Just my humble opinion :-D |
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12/18/2004 09:19:03 PM |
| nice background color that works well for this subject. your title adds quite a bit more to this photo than i would normally interpret, so kudos on that. |
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12/18/2004 12:33:25 PM |
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12/13/2004 10:55:55 PM |
Composition: 6, too tight - almost cropped out the "broken" part
Technical: 8, good shot - lighting, focus
Appeal: 7
Challenge: 5, just cracked - not broken enough for me. ;-)
Overall Score: 5 (weighted) |
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12/13/2004 09:40:57 AM |
| Creepy. If you hadn't specifically mentioned the neck though, I wouldn't really have got "broken". |
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12/12/2004 09:57:31 PM |
| I love the title. And the photo. |
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