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12/25/2004 01:51:24 AM |
Greeting from the Critique Club,
The first noticeable element to this image is the great lighting used it really is first class. The composition is very good for portraiture with the eyes in just the right spot.
Probably the next most important thing I notice is that the picture lacks the impact that is required for a challenge titled broken. To me something broken can be quite dramatic and a mouse in the hands of a toddler will probably end up broken but this is not the same as visually displaying something broken. I think this is the area where voters have marked you down because they found it hard to make that link.
Overall this is a very good portrait but not really suited for this challenge.
Good luck in future challenges.
Best Wishes
Tim Sturt
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12/21/2004 06:57:01 AM |
Hi there. I think this photo deserved better, much better. Judging from the comments, it seems the point may have eluded many voters...either that, or they're not around children very much. :-)
When I see a toddler teething with a mouse, first thought that pops into my mind is, there goes the mouse. |
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12/18/2004 01:18:38 PM |
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12/14/2004 03:42:28 AM |
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12/13/2004 11:18:32 PM |
Composition: 7, Technical: 8, Appeal: 8, Challenge: 6, Overall Score: 7 (weighted) |
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12/13/2004 02:13:13 PM |
Nice lighting, technically proficient shot, but it does seem a little bit like a cute snapshot that relies too heavily on the title to fit the challenge.
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12/13/2004 07:22:29 AM |
Relies too much on title. Shame reall, a technically great shot. |
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12/13/2004 07:02:24 AM |
Not sure this conveys broken. -danny |
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12/12/2004 08:51:40 PM |
This brought a chuckle or two out of me. :)
Great take on the challenge theme. I hope this does well. |
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