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03/02/2003 05:03:28 PM |
Critique Club
Composition-Content
You met the challenge well, in an original way. The angle that you have chosen is interesting and adds another dimension to the picture, however I think I would have prefered a straighter version! The textures are the main attraction to this subject and I think that you have captured this well.
Technical
I think that you have done a good job with the lighting, I like the way that the central part is well lit and the rest is fading into the background a bit, enough overall lighting but this concentrates the viewers attention to the central part. Focus is good, I wonder if a bit more sharpening would give this more impact.
My Opinion
Personally, the subject doesn't reall appeal to me, I like the textures and wonder if you could have made more use of this, perhaps more of a macro type, abstract shot. Interesting different approach to the challenge! Good Luck in the next one! |
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02/22/2003 08:42:33 AM |
| is that underwater? how cool... either way an alternate light source would be best.. the camera flash just doesn't do it justice |
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02/22/2003 03:52:41 AM |
| I like the subject very much. But I would spend more time with it to make out the best of it. |
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02/22/2003 01:15:34 AM |
| I like the darkness in this photo, and the textures are very interesting. |
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02/21/2003 07:58:45 PM |
| The colors and lighting work very well. The angle really distracts from the positives. |
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02/21/2003 06:06:34 PM |
| This hydrant is quite a find! It's bizarre textures are well captured here by the direct light that you use. Its personality may be captured even better with a little more off center cropping than is already present. |
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02/19/2003 11:43:39 AM |
I like the fading light effect, but the subject is crooked, and that's distracting.
6 -lennier |
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02/17/2003 05:58:25 PM |
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02/16/2003 10:02:54 PM |
| Hehehe, should have rotated it to the left about 20 degrees. :) Nice colors on it however. |
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02/16/2003 09:54:50 PM |
| I wonder if it works still... |
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