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Challenge: Yellow Revisited (Basic Editing II)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S5100
Location: my apt
Date: Dec 7, 2004
Aperture: 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/70
Galleries: Macro, Advertisement
Date Uploaded: Dec 7, 2004

Decided I wanted to test how RAW worked with white balance -- I'm impressed. Figured while I had everything set up, I'd participate in this challenge although I wasn't originally going to as I had nothing to submit.

Shot in RAW in home-made light tent.

set white balance, crop, curves, USM, neat image.

I wanted to crop out that piece of dust so bad, but can't under basic (not that I think it will affect my score which is sure to be low)...

that's about it.

Statistics
Place: 250 out of 393
Avg (all users): 4.7941
Avg (commenters): 5.2000
Avg (participants): 4.6447
Avg (non-participants): 4.9833
Views since voting: 895
Views during voting: 347
Votes: 272
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/14/2004 03:54:16 PM
The color seems a little flat, needs a little boost
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12/14/2004 08:02:58 AM
the image needs more saturation: adjusting the shadow point so the densest black is all the way black will help.
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12/14/2004 12:59:36 AM
Colours a bit flat - need boosting. Nice composition though.
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12/13/2004 04:28:34 AM
No muy nítida, ni siquiera llamativa. ¿Lleva quizás a pensar mal? Un 4 estaría bien
12/10/2004 06:28:50 PM
The white background kind of washes out the yellow.
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12/09/2004 07:52:03 PM
returning for comments:
A very nice, advertisement like image with good lighting and composition. Bumping up.
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12/09/2004 05:51:06 PM
nicely lit. good angle. a decent product shot.
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12/09/2004 04:46:57 PM
The color is not right, too washed out
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12/09/2004 02:21:53 PM
Reducing this to 640 pixel width really hurts. I zoomed in on the tape, and can see that it would be easily read in the original. The sign on the side of the tapeis also a little difficult to read and seems dim at this size. I think a little more playing with light positions would have helped this picture, especially moving the one on the right forward, and the one on the left nearer. An 8.
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12/08/2004 11:45:29 PM
Very well done, meets the spirit of the challenge nicely. 7
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12/08/2004 08:05:13 AM
colours could have been more vibrant
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