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02/26/2003 05:54:27 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Does it meet the challenge? It certainly does. The background is definitely yellow, and cannot be mistaken for another colour. That's even though the focal point of the picture isn't the yellow itself.
Very realistic colours, and it seems to have had very little post processing.
Personally, I would have cropped a bit more off the bottom, to remove the horizontal line, which does nothing for you composition. That would have also made the palm seem a bit taller, and it would draw more attention toward the focal point of your picture which is the window.
I agree with one of the comments where you could have tried taking the photo straight on, or from a completely different angle, but I'll assume you did, and you chose the best one in your eyes :) The focus is very good, and so are the colours. There's not much you could improve on, other than that attempt at a crop.
Well done on a good photo. I look forward to seeing more of your work :)
-Annida
Message edited by author 2003-02-26 10:55:35. |
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02/23/2003 06:48:43 PM |
| This is a wonderful shot. Particularly, the tree breaking up continuity of the wall. |
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02/23/2003 05:30:38 PM |
| I like the line use in this photo. |
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02/23/2003 04:25:54 PM |
| Clean crisp focus. Nice shade of yellow and nice contrast with the green. Good composition. |
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02/22/2003 10:07:24 AM |
| WOW! Great colors and I love the contast between the building and the palm tree it's self. Also a nice and crisp photograph, overall...10 |
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02/22/2003 07:52:10 AM |
| nice shot. It reminds me of all the yellow buildings i just saw on vacation in St.Croix. The green of the window and the palm go well together. I would have perhaps shot it either straight on or more at an angle and gotten rid of the brick wall under the tree. |
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02/21/2003 04:27:24 AM |
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02/19/2003 07:56:01 PM |
| wow, now thats yellow. good job |
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02/19/2003 06:45:57 PM |
| Maybe crop out the planter. |
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02/17/2003 07:05:34 PM |
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02/17/2003 06:51:59 PM |
| good color and focus.. good lighting... but kinda boring |
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02/17/2003 05:01:51 PM |
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02/16/2003 10:01:21 PM |
| I've seen trees like that in oregon that look like there in better shape. |
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02/16/2003 09:59:14 PM |
| Nice... I'd like to see a different perspective... maybe more straight on to the window and palm. The yellow wall if very powerfull however. |
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