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12/09/2004 06:51:52 PM |
kind of a random image. not always a bad thing mind you. in my view, a photographers job is to subtly direct the viewer...to convey a message or share a view of something. I'm not really getting that from this. I'm getting the compositional contrast, but not really the point. (I'm not voting by the way, just commenting so don't worry about my opinion affecting your score). I'd be interested to see you work with this theme some more - maybe with different subjects when you're not worried about a challenge.
technically it's pretty solid. focus is good, sharpness and DOF is good. could use a little diffusing of the light to tame some of the hotspots on the metal. even a piece of thin white paperbetween the light source and subject would do the trick.
good luck.
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12/09/2004 06:27:36 AM |
| Good focus. Meets the challenge. :) |
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12/08/2004 09:35:25 AM |
| Nice colors, nice capture of the textrues and metallic highlights. |
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