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12/06/2004 12:01:25 PM |
| I like this subject. Works well in b&w. I think this could use a bit more contrast. Would also suggest a bit more interesting angle or crop for the shot. |
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12/05/2004 04:52:42 PM |
| Good subject. I am starting to think black & white is detrimental to this challenge because it ages the photo with the subject and removes part of that old/new contrast feeling. Speaking of contrast... coulda used a little more I think. I also would not have cropped that close to the top of the carriage. Seems like a good rule for this type of shot would be to crop as if someone was sitting in the seat. Lastly, I would've removed the rock(?). Hope this helps. :-) |
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12/05/2004 02:09:12 PM |
| Definitely low tech transport. Your choice of a bleaching in b/w has a positive effect on aging the image even more. It is well placed and cropped, perhaps slightly too much on the top, but this is not detracting in any way. Nice job! |
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12/05/2004 07:35:28 AM |
| Good subject. A bit more contrast might have lifted the focal point away from the background, but overall a good shot. |
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12/04/2004 07:38:11 PM |
| This needs something to separate it from the background. More contrast, DOF, different angle, color - I'm not sure what the solution is. As for the concept of low tech, it certainly fits. 5 |
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12/03/2004 10:41:15 AM |
| The wagon really blends in too much with the background |
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12/02/2004 06:20:46 PM |
| Great shot...a slightly darker version may provide greater depth and contrast. |
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12/01/2004 09:07:53 AM |
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12/01/2004 03:01:48 AM |
| great subject, i would love to see it in color. too grey for me personaly, however credit is given for composition, subject and tecnique. |
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12/01/2004 02:34:15 AM |
| Nice title. Works well with the challenge theme. |
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11/30/2004 04:56:38 PM |
| Only miss a little contrast. I think this is the defiition of this challenge. |
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11/30/2004 12:54:03 PM |
| I would love to have this wagon in my yard! I really like the picture, very interesting and nostalgic. |
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11/30/2004 11:41:12 AM |
| I like the feel of the photo, although I may like to see it from a different angl. and maybe from further back. |
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11/30/2004 03:22:25 AM |
| Great idea. More contrast would have helped here. |
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11/29/2004 09:18:17 PM |
| I think a sepia would have looked better with this subject. The composition is a bit tight and centered. I would suggest approaching this subject in an artistic manner, rather than taking a photo which documents the fact that its sitting there :) |
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11/29/2004 08:58:47 PM |
| Nice view and interesting object. You might consider deepening your tones slightly. Try sliding the middle slider to the right just a tad in Levels. Very nice, evocative image. 8 |
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11/29/2004 08:16:44 PM |
hey i'm gettin' 1 of those for my 16th birthday!
j/k
nice shot |
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11/29/2004 07:14:49 PM |
No power at all!
A bit more contrast would help the subject stand out. Use levels adjustment to make the whites brighter, and the dark grays blacker. |
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