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12/06/2004 01:09:38 PM |
Good title and the tabletop works well with this hardware. |
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12/06/2004 09:55:59 AM |
Easily linked to technology and is low tech. Subject seems too far away to have solid impact. Lighting is great however. Good use of croparea in relation to the location of the subject, but the edge of the table is distracting on the right side. |
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12/05/2004 06:23:49 PM |
Fits the challenge, great title. 7 |
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12/05/2004 05:53:29 PM |
Third typewriter I've seen & almost the best, but the lighting could be just a little softer and seems like it would be better on a solid colored surface - the wood color just overpowers the photo. Also would like to see paper in it and, if done properly, typing hands could help. Good job overall though! |
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12/03/2004 10:45:26 PM |
I think I would have liked the subject to fill up the photo more |
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12/02/2004 05:14:04 AM |
I think this would have been perfect if there were more details of the typewriter and less of the table ledge on the right. I love the lighting although it is a bit bright (sharp shadows on the bottom). |
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12/01/2004 01:45:40 PM |
Good subject, great focus and framing. IMHO losing the tabletop might have helped it do better. See Old Words entry for my top typewriter pic though. |
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11/30/2004 07:24:45 AM |
great lighting, the top looks slightly oof. |
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11/30/2004 02:25:12 AM |
Good idea, if a little dark but great shot. |
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11/29/2004 09:01:34 PM |
nice colour great shot-GL |
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11/29/2004 07:19:00 PM |
Good composition and lighting but the table is too "new" looking. |
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