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Ripe Persimmons
Ripe Persimmons
bryanbrazil


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Lucky 7 (Basic Editing I)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: Fortuna, CA
Date: Nov 24, 2004
Aperture: f14
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1.6s
Galleries: Snapshot, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Nov 28, 2004

Was at the parents' for Thanksgiving, and just happened to see a basket with 7 persimmons in it.

Statistics
Place: 123 out of 260
Avg (all users): 5.1661
Avg (commenters): 5.4444
Avg (participants): 5.1053
Avg (non-participants): 5.2086
Views since voting: 821
Views during voting: 347
Votes: 277
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/03/2004 08:06:19 PM
this is a really nice pic but the white border makes the crop feel too close, it adds a clinical harshness to an otherwise warm and inviting image.
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12/03/2004 03:47:06 PM
Good work with texture and light. The placement of the handles is a bit distracting. If placed at the sides they could have been cropped out.
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12/03/2004 12:22:52 AM
i like this shot but think maybe a desat would look good here also?
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12/02/2004 07:28:22 PM
Interesting color, it has a cool metallic quality to it. Might have been good to have the handle of the basket on the bottom so it's cut off, as is it's a little distracting. Overall, good focus and lighting with simple composition make this a decent picture.
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12/02/2004 08:22:05 AM
The border is no good. You should have left it away and put in all of the basket instead.
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12/01/2004 10:32:41 AM
nice pic
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12/01/2004 05:17:49 AM
Great still life. I like.
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11/30/2004 07:45:48 PM
I like it, but it looks like you were using mixed light (natural + electric) and didn't quite get the color balance right. Maybe it's just my eyes, but this shot looks like one I took of my cat in mixed light, and I had a hard time correcting the white balance.
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11/30/2004 07:16:16 PM
I like the color of the fruits, but it would be more interesting if it weren't centered.
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