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Challenge: Serpentine (DPL4 WK3) (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-5D Mark III
Lens: Canon EF 24-70 2.8L II
Date: Jul 15, 2018
Aperture: 7.1
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/200
Date Uploaded: Jul 15, 2018

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Place: 35 out of 126
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07/21/2018 08:48:17 AM
Voted earlier coming back to comment.

The twisting curving moves of this dancer is impressive! It is a wonderful shot it just suffers from not being well lit enough for the viewer to fully appreciate all the details. The front of this dancer is a bit too underexposed in that it falls and blends into shadow in spots - portions of her face, legs and hair. Now the light behind her does 'outline' her shape with the arms, upper body and the curve of neck to chin. Depending on what look you were going for another light behind her hair could have outlined the bottom half of the dancer's body better. Then there would be the 'hair light' outline all along the shape of the dancer. And/or you could add another difused light to the front to fill in and illuminate her more.
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 07/18/2018 08:54:37 AM
Just a little bit more light on her ... otherwise - very graceful.
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