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11/21/2004 02:37:55 PM |
Good composition, but a plain (or no) frame would be much better |
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11/21/2004 09:42:31 AM |
The idea is ok but this is far too dark. |
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11/19/2004 06:31:23 PM |
Good composition (use of lines) here. |
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11/16/2004 02:36:24 PM |
Good composition with the white headstone in the last corner third |
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11/15/2004 12:28:00 PM |
Having the bright stone on the thirds line is a good choice for composition. I like the diagonal line of the stones. It needs more interest somehow - would be nice if the leaves at the top came more into the frame. It feels very rough, grainy, which works with the subject. But at the same time the scattered stones and the scattered texture make it feel to loose for me. Perhaps getting in a bit closer to the white stone, and using a smaller depth of focus so the one stone is sharp while the other blur into the distance. This would anchor the composition more. |
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11/15/2004 05:38:52 AM |
well done! I really like this one. |
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11/14/2004 07:13:02 PM |
Could use a bit more focus and a bit too dark for my taste. That border doesn't help much eitehr though -- good concept however. |
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