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Day at the Park
Day at the Park
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Extended Free Study 2017-07 (Extended Editing)
Camera: Canon T5 (1200d)
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 II
Location: Hutchinson, KS
Date: Aug 6, 2017
Aperture: 10.0
ISO: 400
Shutter: 1/60
Date Uploaded: Aug 13, 2017

 This is my Great-Niece Freya, it was taken before the storms had hit our area. The editing was done in Adobe Lightroom. I left the white balance as shot because it was the only way it looked right. I also cropped it some to balance the image out. I then used the Basic, Tone Curve, Detail and Effect panels to make the general adjustments that were needed. I used the Advance tools specifically the Adjustment Brush to soften her skin, bring out the colors in her shirt and darken the grass surrounding her.

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 08/23/2017 04:33:15 AM
Hello from the critique club

An appealing image that contributes to the open challenge.

You have captured your subject in a very appealing pose that also feels quite natural and therefore flattering so well done for that. However, the crucial areas in particular the eyes and face just do not feel sharp enough, it feels almost like camera shake which is quite possible at your shooting speed. The sharpest point appears to be the hair at the back of the head and even this is still a little blurry. I would suggest that shooting at f8 and 1/125 would have given you a sharper image but again all credit to the pose you obviously have the timing but the technicals need a little more work, good luck.
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08/15/2017 06:36:48 PM
What a cutie.
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 08/14/2017 08:53:00 PM
what a lovelly portrait its all together


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