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Challenge: Obscured II (Standard Editing)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-6D
Lens: Canon EF 70-200mm f/2.8L IS USM II
Location: Downtown
Date: Jul 13, 2016
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 0.8
Date Uploaded: Jul 14, 2016

 This challenge asked of reflection to provide a special composition. This building caught my attention and I focused on the dark side windows

Thank you in advance for your feedback

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Place: 18 out of 42
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 07/25/2016 02:59:13 AM
Hello from the critique club

An interesting image that meets the challenge

Well done Marcel in finding the potential for this challenge in the building you have observed. In terms of the challenge I think your composition could have been significantly more effective, overall I find this composition has strong visual elements that compete for attention away from the challenge theme of obscurity. I would suggest a panoramic crop of the top section of the building from where the line of the windows meets the edge to include the floor of the topmost section. This would make for a much simpler and more effective composition consisting solely of obscurity which would have met the challenge theme better and may well have scored higher.

Thanks for your entry Marcel
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/22/2016 05:50:05 PM
A great abstract image; it looks like it is floating.
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