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09/04/2016 07:50:12 AM |
There is a story here but I'm not feeling it. The individual photographs are fine but they aren't holding my attention. I enjoy your work so don't take this critique personally. Side challenges are about us growing together. Learning from our analysis as much as what we capture and create.
Message edited by author 2016-09-04 11:51:42. |
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08/04/2016 09:26:13 AM |
| It seems to me that there is not too much continuity of thoughts. I would keep this first image and the ones where you have the sellers. This way we get a solid idea, especially since you captured various expressions of these sellers that create a true story of their point of view and not of a passerby. |
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07/06/2016 10:47:52 AM |
You took us nicely from truck to truck, each time in the serving zone. Nice energy there, and different but the same.
I also like the B&W, but I'm partial to it as a rule. It showed the personnel as the important part of the image, whilst a colour image would probably be more about being loud.
Thank you for the enjoyable serving.
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