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11/08/2004 05:03:09 PM |
| Great idea and I think it would have been a great facial expression of excitement and indecision. However, this shot is just way too out of focus to bring interest to the photo. Keep trying and focus/higher shutter speed might be the key. Don't give up, that's how we all learn. |
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11/08/2004 12:30:01 AM |
| The strength of this image is lost because of the focus used on the two characters. I perhaps would have cropped the person on the left out of the photograph. |
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11/07/2004 04:51:19 PM |
| Too blurry. Busy image. You might've tried getting just 1 person, or at least cropping out the unnecessary black bar on the right, person on the left...It's at least seemingly on topic. |
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11/06/2004 03:10:17 PM |
| I think that if the focus had been sharper, and if you had been able to position yourself so that the woman was in front of only the blue curtain and that the fellow in the hat was less intrusive, this photo might have worked better. |
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11/06/2004 12:10:52 PM |
| composition could be improved by cropping out person on far left and along the yellow brick line on the right |
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11/05/2004 08:05:56 PM |
| relies on the title to meet the challenge and it's really blurry |
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11/05/2004 12:49:54 PM |
Challenge link: strong.
Image critique: yes, she looks indecisive. It's just that the image is washed out and not very appealing. So if the challenge brief is everything - you've achieved what you wanted. But if you don't want to get fed up with seeing a shot in your portfolio then you may have failed!
Out-of-challenge appeal: none. |
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11/03/2004 08:52:22 PM |
| blur?? not sure what you are trying for. or if you were trying at all. 1 |
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11/03/2004 01:17:17 PM |
| to look at this without the title - kind of makes you wonder what the point is |
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11/03/2004 11:24:04 AM |
| it's difficult to pick up what's happening here - it looks like she's eating something |
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11/03/2004 08:36:52 AM |
| Missing focus... and this is not the kind of a picture that looks good w/o something in focus, imo. |
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11/03/2004 07:45:45 AM |
| ooooh - she is blurry, the wall in the back is out of focus...the gent in the back is not focused well either, and white balance appears off (a yellowish cast) and the background is distracting, the hands or ?? on the left should be cropped out....need i go on? |
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11/02/2004 08:24:24 PM |
| Perhaps this photo could have told a story if it had at least SOME parts in focus. |
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