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03/09/2016 08:36:59 AM |
Hello from the critique club
An appealing image that meets the challenge well
A great idea Clara, the resulting colours and shapes have produced an original and colourful abstract and therefore fulfilled the challenge brief well. The bright vivid colours work well against the darker water background, I like the shape to the upper right with the blue nose it reminds me of Venetian carnival mask looking down.
The only constructive remark I would like to make is that there is some softness top and bottom due to the way the camera was probably held, ie., at an angle to the surface, by holding the camera accurately horizontal to the surface this would have been avoided. I wouldn't say that the softness detracts in any detrimental way so this just meant to be constructive help.
Its great to see your involvement at such a young age and the creativity you have shown here promises very well for the future, I look forward to seeing more from you, thanks for your entry Clara |
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03/08/2016 06:26:16 PM |
| abstraction swirls into itself, risking the Solipsism of referencing nothing but itself. |
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03/06/2016 04:57:17 PM |
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03/06/2016 08:58:37 AM |
| Very interesting to look at. Good luck! |
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03/06/2016 07:50:07 AM |
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