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02/12/2003 03:56:25 PM |
Critique CLub Comment by Grayce
As has been suggested already, this is a photojournalistic type of picture. There is a story to be told here.
The surroundings are good and work well, but if you had slightly repositioned yourself you wouldn't have the Obelisque coming out of the person's head. These are important details we need to watch for as photographers. We've all done it though.
I'm certain this would have scored higher if it was light enough to see some detail on the faces of the people.
I don't know if the car is parked or moving, it would be a little better without it. Of course if it's parked the only option you'd have is to reposition yourself.
I hope these comments help.
Regards,
Grayce |
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02/07/2003 04:56:46 PM |
Overall it's just too dark. |
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02/07/2003 01:56:47 PM |
Great interpretation of the challenge. Pity about the pole coming out of the one guy's head. If you'd cropped him out you'd still have had a pretty decent photo. |
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02/06/2003 01:52:56 PM |
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02/06/2003 03:39:27 AM |
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02/05/2003 02:33:00 PM |
I love the title. This is what my kids think about me. I just wish the photo were lighter so I could see their faces better. Beautifully done with good, sharp, clear focus. Nice composition. This is a really nice photo, especially considering the weather. Just lighten it up some, and don't crop off the one persons feet. Would rather see less sky and have his feet, or cut off the feet of all three. |
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02/04/2003 10:15:55 PM |
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02/04/2003 06:16:38 PM |
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02/03/2003 12:51:37 PM |
this would be a really good photo if it wasn't quite so dark. i like the concept and the positions of the subjects...just wish i could see their faces. |
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Photographer found comment helpful. |
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02/02/2003 08:11:53 PM |
very photojournalistic. This is good. |
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