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01/08/2005 06:52:04 PM |
Nice... I would have maybe focused on the 4 flowers on the right more. They are powerfull. As it is, the photo is "lop sided" a little. |
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01/08/2005 04:26:08 PM |
I really like this one. I like the amount of dof you used. I don't find the image to be too dark. The in-focus images appear to be the proper color. Everything is very sharp. Only suggestion for this one is to have maybe put all of the in-focus flowers totally in the frame. That's probably just a personally preference though. Very nice shot! |
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01/05/2005 07:28:18 AM |
This is my favorite of yours! Maybe just a little on the dark side, but that's pretty easy to fix should you choose to. I love the clarity of the center flower and the surrounding bits of color from the out of focus ones also in the shot. The different shades of pink, the yellow centers and a few bits of white help add some interest without being distracting. This would be a lovely print. |
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01/03/2005 11:38:08 AM |
This one is beautiful!
I love your DOF and the details on the sharp flowers in the foreground.
I think your composition is wonderful regarding the flowers you chose to have in focus.
Just a tiny thing I would change: my eye is drawn to the dark point to the right of the centered flower. It looks like a close flower or something like that, but I feel it's a little bit distructing.
You can try dodging it a bit or just lighten it's colors a tiny bit, to make it closer to the light pink of the rest of the flowers.
Other then that I think this is one of your best! It is so cheerful and sunny |
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01/03/2005 11:25:21 AM |
I don't like this one as much as the others. The pink and the green don't go together for me. I also think that the many small petals in the background are distracting. I don't know what to focus on.
I have to admit though that the shallow DOF is well chosen. It blurs the distracting background and diminishes it's effect. Yet, three flowers in focus are two too many.
You made a good use of the USM, I like the crispness of the central flower's petal. |
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01/03/2005 10:16:39 AM |
Very nice color...just realized your are using an olympus...I love my 5050 but wish I could afford the e-volt. I like your depth of field and how you did "dead center" the one flower but your other two to the right are in sharp focus so it is not distracting. My eye was drawn all around the shot. Very nice |
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