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02/03/2003 11:30:44 AM |
Critique Club by inspzil
Composition - As much as I loved Legos as a kid, I love them now that I have kids. I'm not terribly fond of this shot. I don't like the way this looks photoshopped, even if it isn't. Shooting on mirrors has a tendency to make the background look far away, which is true in this case. They're square all right so it does meet the challenge. I think the colors are great. I wish the reds were more in the forefront though to demonstrate all the colors in the light a little. The crop is in that middle area where I think it should be either a little tighter, or a little further back. Preferably a little further back because I think you could hide the fact that its not perfectly focused a little better.
Photography - The focus issue is huge. I don't get why you needed an 8 second exposure either. I don't know what it adds to this shot. I think the focus issue might stem from this. This is the major problem with this photo above and beyond everything in my opinion.
Processing - Good work with the colors, if you did indeed enhance them. I don't know if the sharpen filter in PS could help this or not, but it would be worth a try.
Overall - I didn't vote on about half the shots the first time around, and this was one of those. I think it would've been more successful if it were crisp. I still don't understand the long exposure time for this shot. It may be something that I might want to know about, so feel free to PM me if there is a good explanation. :) I definitely don't know everything about photography!! Good Luck in future challenges - Bob |
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02/02/2003 04:12:58 PM |
| the writing on top of the blocks is a true test of your macro lens, eh? |
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02/02/2003 01:22:09 AM |
| Great idea and colors, just a bit soft on focus. I can't tell for sure whether they are moving or sitting still. |
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02/01/2003 06:48:13 PM |
Ever step on one of these things, at night, in the dark, barefooted? OUCH.
On a mirror, right? Good clear shot. |
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01/28/2003 06:05:51 PM |
| Would have been nicer in focus. |
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01/28/2003 10:05:34 AM |
| I really like your idea and composition. I think it would be improved if the background were really white, but overall it's a good shot! |
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01/27/2003 12:39:00 PM |
| Cool - it looks suspended in mid air!!! Neat trick with the mirror!! Love the colors, composition, everything!! 8 |
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01/26/2003 09:51:34 PM |
| Use Unsharp Mask next time. It would really help this. I love the look of it but the lack of sharpness really takes a lot away from it. Still you get a 7. |
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